Some of our recent recount writing....
THE PUPPET SHOW by Felix A few weeks ago our class went to a puppet show. The guy who did it introduced himself. His name was Bob and he was dressed like an Indian person. He was very funny. First he got two metal balls out of his magic box and juggled with them. After that he got a singing bowl. Some time later he got a snake out and James got to hold it. Meanwhile he got a puppet out and it started to dance. Then he got another puppet and another. Finally it was over and in the end it was a boring puppet show.
The puppet show by Lucy Belle Last Tuesday bob had returned to our school once again to perform an Indian puppet show. He started by playing an Indian instrument which included a bowl and a spoon. Then he revealed his puppets. After a while James got picked to have a cobra around his neck. My favourite part was when he made the man get bucked off the horse. In the end I had a great time!
THE PUPPET SHOW by Clara Sirmans There was a puppet show in our school. We went to the hall to see it. There was a person wearing an Indain outfit. His name was Bob. First he showed us music with a bowl and a stick. The sound was beautiful and gentle. The music stopped. He opened a chest and a little puppet came out. Bob said the puppet was a drummer. He went around to the room slapping his drum. After the drummer went around the room Bob took out a puppet who was on a horse he did tricks. After 5 minutes a long snake came out a boy from our class got chosen to hold the snake.Ten minutes later two kids got chosen to dance with puppets everybody luaghed. I had a great time.
The Puppet Show by Eoin On Tuesday a few weks ago, my class were called to the Halla to see the return of Bob , who had previously been seen doing a circus, and was now back to do a puppet show. We got seats so we would be more comfortable than last time, where we had to sit on the cold and uncomfortable floor. I was in the middle of the back row, next to Elijah. When we were all quiet he explained that the puppet show was themed on India. Then he took out some Indian objects. First he took out some Indian juggling balls with bells inside them. He could do loads of tricks with them. Then he showed us a singing bowl. It was a metal bowl with a thick metal stick. He rolled the stick around the outside of the bowl and it began to sing. Then he reavealed his puppets. First he took out an Indian drummer and Bob could make him bang on his drum. After a while James was picked to have a cobra around his neck. It came up his back and then slithered of his arm. And finaly he showed us a 'magic trick' with cards and a string, and he could make the box stop in the middle of the string. My favourite part was when the man went underneath the horse and came up the other side. I thought it was a fun puppet show and I hope to see another one soon.
The Puppet Show by Andrija
During school time we went to a puppet show in the halla. The puppet show was really funny. The masters name was Bob. He had some puppets and puppet horses. There was also king puppets and queen puppets. He had some bells with jingles. I really liked the puppet show.
We have been learning about Narrative Writing. We have looked at the structure and have had fun in creating some exciting stories with some difficult problems which need solving! We hope you enjoy meeting our characters and reading about their adventures.
The Evil Wizard Strikes Again
by Felix
Long long ago in a fiery place there was man named Nick. He was a very nice guy. He was the hero of the place. Whenever there was a villain he'd be there to save the day. He only had one enemy, The Evil Wizard, who was making a plan to kill Nick. He was gathering an army of wolves and The Evil Wizard told them to kill Nick for what he'd done. Nick had chopped off his foot. So The Evil Wizard charged into the town. “Where is Nick?” he shouted. Then Nick came flying in and they started to fight. While they were fighting Nick saw a ring on The Evil Wizard's finger and he thought that it might control the army so he took it off the evil wizard and Nick gained control of the army. And they killed the evil wizard. They lived happily ever after.
The Amazing Young Knights
by Haroldas
One time a retired grandpa was a knight. His teenagers were Tom, Nick and Denis. Tom liked stunts. Denis was brave and could really fight! Nick was all about defending. They all signed up to be a knight. They began training and they passed! So then the three went in the snowy hills. They saw a castle with no one inside. Nick was surprised and put his guard up and they found treasure! Denis grabbed the chest and got out he said '' The boss will be happy'' Nick replied '' Just be careful they might be near us. So the three knights came to the base to see the boss. They told the boss that they found treasure. The boss was very happy but said ''This treasure belongs to the strongest team they will find us!'' Then they heard stomping. They peered and saw the knights on the mountains! They both went into battle but then they hid and the other knights were battling. Tom said'' We need a plan!'' Then suddenly he said ''The diamond sword!''He took it and went into battle with Denis and Nick. The diamond sword had to be placed at the top of the mountain. He sneaked up to the mountain and suddenly ''Bang!'' Everyone was saved! When they were old they would never forget that day!
The Farmers
by Sam N
In a farm yard at night, the family all went to sleep. Then in the morning Ray fed the cows and the pigs and all the other animals. Amanda and Jerry were playing and suddenly the animals came running down the main street. Amanda got in to the jeep and chased after the animals. The kids got into the jeeps and helped Amanda. They got the animals back safely they lived happily ever after.
Super Gadget
by Yahya
Once upon a time, there was a man called Gadget. It was a nice summer day and Gadget was ready to go to work. He remembered it was a Saturday. He wanted to enjoy the weekend in a park so he went there and he sat down on his favourite bench to enjoy the sun. Suddenly it got dark and a spaceship was in the sky. Gadget was terrified and ran quickly. He bumped in to a man called Shawn. Then the enemies who came down from the spaceship, started to fight everyone. They wanted to use some cool weapons but there is not any weapons to be found. Then they thought to just talk to the enemies and said how important it is to be kind to everyone. The enemies were sorry and they said sorry to everyone.
Lost in New York city
by Lucy-Belle
Emily, Olivia, Mom and Dad were on holiday in America. They decided to travel to New York city. When they got there Mom, Emily and Olivia wanted to go shopping for new clothes, dad wanted to look in the sport shops. Mom Emily and Olivia went in the shop. Mom wanted to look at adult clothes so Emily and Olivia wandered off. An hour later Mom was finally finished looking. Mom was trying to find Emily and Olivia, she could not find them. She rang dad. Mom and dad were very worried they checked everywhere so they went back to the house. Emily and Olivia were so worried they could not find Mom and dad. They went up to reception. They called out “Can the parents of Emily and Olivia come to reception please” no one came. When the shop was closing, a woman from reception brought them back to her house. She had lit the fire and got them new pyjamas from the shop and got them hot chocolate. Emily and Olivia were worried because it was was only two days before Christmas the woman knew too. In the morning the girls were so worried luckily the woman had Santa's number. It was Christmas Eve. Santa had already got in contact with the finder. He had their present and he would bring them home. Later that night Santa had got them in his sleigh. By morning the girls had their present and in bed. When they woke up they ran into Mom and Dads bed and gave them a big hug. They were so happy.
The Adventures Of Bob, Garry And Steve
by Poppy
A long time ago in a far away land, there lived a man called Garry Mc Fadom. That is also where a weird kid called Bob lived. He liked to play
football and Garry liked to play basketball. One day Garry and Bob both woke up feeling like they want to go to the moon. So they both went to the rocket launcher and got in the rocket 3,2,1 take off. When they were directly above the moon the rocket broke down it landed with a thump on the moon. The door opened Bob and Garry found themselves on the moon. Garry thought it was a cheese moon so he took a bit off and ate it. Turns out it was a cheese moon. Bob loved cheese but Garry wasn't so keen on it. Just then they turned round to see a real life alien. Bob got so excited he jumped for joy and nearly squashed Garry. Now the alien finally introduced himself “I am alien Steve why are you here” alien Steve said. “We accidentally crash landed and our rocket is broken so how do we get back to earth” Bob said. “I have an idea” said Steve “we can make jetpacks out of the broken rocket parts. “Great thinking Steve now we can get back and do some making which I love to do” said Bob. “It took a long time to finish but it is epic” said Garry. “I will be so glad when I get back to earth I am going to give my wife a big hug” Garry said as he and Bob got ready for take off they waved goodbye to Steve. Off they went back to earth.
The Evil Wizard Strikes Again
by Felix
Long long ago in a fiery place there was man named Nick. He was a very nice guy. He was the hero of the place. Whenever there was a villain he'd be there to save the day. He only had one enemy, The Evil Wizard, who was making a plan to kill Nick. He was gathering an army of wolves and The Evil Wizard told them to kill Nick for what he'd done. Nick had chopped off his foot. So The Evil Wizard charged into the town. “Where is Nick?” he shouted. Then Nick came flying in and they started to fight. While they were fighting Nick saw a ring on The Evil Wizard's finger and he thought that it might control the army so he took it off the evil wizard and Nick gained control of the army. And they killed the evil wizard. They lived happily ever after.
The Amazing Young Knights
by Haroldas
One time a retired grandpa was a knight. His teenagers were Tom, Nick and Denis. Tom liked stunts. Denis was brave and could really fight! Nick was all about defending. They all signed up to be a knight. They began training and they passed! So then the three went in the snowy hills. They saw a castle with no one inside. Nick was surprised and put his guard up and they found treasure! Denis grabbed the chest and got out he said '' The boss will be happy'' Nick replied '' Just be careful they might be near us. So the three knights came to the base to see the boss. They told the boss that they found treasure. The boss was very happy but said ''This treasure belongs to the strongest team they will find us!'' Then they heard stomping. They peered and saw the knights on the mountains! They both went into battle but then they hid and the other knights were battling. Tom said'' We need a plan!'' Then suddenly he said ''The diamond sword!''He took it and went into battle with Denis and Nick. The diamond sword had to be placed at the top of the mountain. He sneaked up to the mountain and suddenly ''Bang!'' Everyone was saved! When they were old they would never forget that day!
The Farmers
by Sam N
In a farm yard at night, the family all went to sleep. Then in the morning Ray fed the cows and the pigs and all the other animals. Amanda and Jerry were playing and suddenly the animals came running down the main street. Amanda got in to the jeep and chased after the animals. The kids got into the jeeps and helped Amanda. They got the animals back safely they lived happily ever after.
Super Gadget
by Yahya
Once upon a time, there was a man called Gadget. It was a nice summer day and Gadget was ready to go to work. He remembered it was a Saturday. He wanted to enjoy the weekend in a park so he went there and he sat down on his favourite bench to enjoy the sun. Suddenly it got dark and a spaceship was in the sky. Gadget was terrified and ran quickly. He bumped in to a man called Shawn. Then the enemies who came down from the spaceship, started to fight everyone. They wanted to use some cool weapons but there is not any weapons to be found. Then they thought to just talk to the enemies and said how important it is to be kind to everyone. The enemies were sorry and they said sorry to everyone.
Lost in New York city
by Lucy-Belle
Emily, Olivia, Mom and Dad were on holiday in America. They decided to travel to New York city. When they got there Mom, Emily and Olivia wanted to go shopping for new clothes, dad wanted to look in the sport shops. Mom Emily and Olivia went in the shop. Mom wanted to look at adult clothes so Emily and Olivia wandered off. An hour later Mom was finally finished looking. Mom was trying to find Emily and Olivia, she could not find them. She rang dad. Mom and dad were very worried they checked everywhere so they went back to the house. Emily and Olivia were so worried they could not find Mom and dad. They went up to reception. They called out “Can the parents of Emily and Olivia come to reception please” no one came. When the shop was closing, a woman from reception brought them back to her house. She had lit the fire and got them new pyjamas from the shop and got them hot chocolate. Emily and Olivia were worried because it was was only two days before Christmas the woman knew too. In the morning the girls were so worried luckily the woman had Santa's number. It was Christmas Eve. Santa had already got in contact with the finder. He had their present and he would bring them home. Later that night Santa had got them in his sleigh. By morning the girls had their present and in bed. When they woke up they ran into Mom and Dads bed and gave them a big hug. They were so happy.
The Adventures Of Bob, Garry And Steve
by Poppy
A long time ago in a far away land, there lived a man called Garry Mc Fadom. That is also where a weird kid called Bob lived. He liked to play
football and Garry liked to play basketball. One day Garry and Bob both woke up feeling like they want to go to the moon. So they both went to the rocket launcher and got in the rocket 3,2,1 take off. When they were directly above the moon the rocket broke down it landed with a thump on the moon. The door opened Bob and Garry found themselves on the moon. Garry thought it was a cheese moon so he took a bit off and ate it. Turns out it was a cheese moon. Bob loved cheese but Garry wasn't so keen on it. Just then they turned round to see a real life alien. Bob got so excited he jumped for joy and nearly squashed Garry. Now the alien finally introduced himself “I am alien Steve why are you here” alien Steve said. “We accidentally crash landed and our rocket is broken so how do we get back to earth” Bob said. “I have an idea” said Steve “we can make jetpacks out of the broken rocket parts. “Great thinking Steve now we can get back and do some making which I love to do” said Bob. “It took a long time to finish but it is epic” said Garry. “I will be so glad when I get back to earth I am going to give my wife a big hug” Garry said as he and Bob got ready for take off they waved goodbye to Steve. Off they went back to earth.
Zapped with Dark Magic
Adam,Timmy and Isebel were walking in the park
until John appeared and zapped Isebel with his dark evil magic.
Adam and Timmy rushed to Tim's house and borrowed swords
and magic. Tim knew where John's evil castle was and
gave them the map. Adam and Timmy found
John and his army, killed them and Isebel was
all well again. They all had a party to celebrate
the defeat of John and that Isebel was all well again, HURRAY!
By Adam
Adam,Timmy and Isebel were walking in the park
until John appeared and zapped Isebel with his dark evil magic.
Adam and Timmy rushed to Tim's house and borrowed swords
and magic. Tim knew where John's evil castle was and
gave them the map. Adam and Timmy found
John and his army, killed them and Isebel was
all well again. They all had a party to celebrate
the defeat of John and that Isebel was all well again, HURRAY!
By Adam
Here are some pirate poems and chants we enjoyed working on.
The matey peglegs of the
seven seas rule the mighty seas.
We will stay strong as the beast
Shout my cheer in spirit across the seven seas GO PIRATES GO!!!
By Damien, Erica, Haroldas and Joy
Pirates pirates hoy hoy hoy
Mast the sails ahoy hoy hoy
Steal the treasure oi oi oi
We're the pirates
Go go go!!!
By Eoin, Evan, Sam O'R
Pirates are evil pirates and mean
Kill all the pirates and then
we'll be free
We went on to sail we fought some
pirates and they absolutely failed
We stole all their gold and we
put it on our ship
We kicked them out
By Sam N, James and Andrija
Pirates pirates all around .
They are on sea and ground
no arms please just a hook.
They so bad just like crook.
Treasure treasure to be found lost
more than just one pound
By Rian, Maria and Aislinn
Let uncle billys pirate
hatch because
The pirates eyepatch is clear
so we can cheer cheer cheer
cause the pirates
end is near.
By Felix, Elijah and Sacha
We are pirates yes we are.
They are wimps yes they are.
We rock the seven sea like ANGRY BEES. GO PIRATES GO!!!!!!
By Yayha, Leila, Cian
They are on sea and ground
no arms please just a hook.
They so bad just like crook.
Treasure treasure to be found lost
more than just one pound
By Rian, Maria and Aislinn
Let uncle billys pirate
hatch because
The pirates eyepatch is clear
so we can cheer cheer cheer
cause the pirates
end is near.
By Felix, Elijah and Sacha
We are pirates yes we are.
They are wimps yes they are.
We rock the seven sea like ANGRY BEES. GO PIRATES GO!!!!!!
By Yayha, Leila, Cian